Where should I start? It was a great piece. I definitely loved the art, the animation was solid although certain ends could've used some more spice. But as an animator myself I can tell that a ton of work has gone into this none the less.
I was a bit surprised when the main character suddenly was about to die when getting hit by that last arrow. As a fellow Dark Souls player, I know darn well an arrow can turn a tide in the game, but the reaction to the action in the animation made it seem like it was just a scratch as he barely moved an inch after getting hit.. perhaps he should've been hit in the chest along with him being staggered to amplify the severity of his situation.
But other than that, this is a jewel on the front page in my opinion!